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Apr 032019
 

Recently, the developers of Neon Tide contacted me to tell me about their Kickstarter campaign and ask if I’d be interested in playing their demo.

Neon Tide is a cyberpunk visual novel set in a world with sentient AI and a virus known as the “Neon Tide” that is affecting robots.

The visual novel itself is almost completed, and the Kickstarter campaign is so they can add voice acting as well as a Japanese translation.

It’s clearly an ambitious project, with character models instead of the typical 2D sprites used in visual novels and a mixture of still shots and animated scenes. The cyberpunk aesthetic is visible throughout the game, including its menus, which gives it a nice flair.

However, I feel like it could benefit from a bit of traditional visual novel storytelling as well. The silent scenes in the demo, while impressive, were a bit hard to follow. I found myself hoping for a bit of narration to give more context to the game’s events.

(Then again, maybe the ambiguity is intentional, especially if it’s the start of the game.)

Neon Tide’s demo tosses you into the fray with two characters. One is a sentient hologram whose motives are unclear aside from hating AI, and the other is an AI infected by the Neon Tide trying to escape some sort of robot facility.

I was intrigued by what was happening, but again, I wanted a bit more context. Similarly, while the hologram character (Beta) had a few moments of internal narration, it wasn’t quite enough yet for me to connect to him as a character. He seems like the main protagonist, but I was more interested in what was going on with the robots.

According to the Kickstarter page, the fully-infected AI wants to rule over humanity while the partly-infected AI wants the two groups to live in harmony, and it sounds like Beta will be swept up in trying to learn the truth about the Neon Tide.

Neon Tide has an intriguing premise and an ambitious vision. The demo left me just a bit too confused to be sold on its storytelling, but I’ll be keeping an eye on it as we go forward.

Mar 152019
 

Last month, I posted about the Kickstarter campaign for Eternal Radiance, the action RPG / visual novel hybrid I’m writing the script for.

I’m pleased to say the Kickstarter was a success!

Eternal Radiance met its funding goal early on and then made the first stretch goal as well. While we couldn’t quite reach the second stretch goal, it was a great campaign overall.

You can still check out the Kickstarter or website if you’re interested in learning more about the game, and of course you can ask me any questions you have as well.

I’ll be hard at work writing the next part of the script. Eternal Radiance is planned for the PC, PS4, and Switch. Are you planning to pick it up when it’s finished? And if you tried the demo, how did you like it?

Feb 132019
 

Some of you might already know that the JRPG-inspired action RPG I’ve been working on was rebranded as Eternal Radiance, now a hybrid visual novel/action RPG. With this new scope set for the project, Eternal Radiance is now live on Kickstarter.

The biggest change is that while Eternal Radiance still has 3D dungeons and combat, towns and storytelling will now be handled in a visual novel format.

This also allowed us to create a demo that shows a full slice of the game’s beginning, which you can download and play here (or follow the link from the Kickstarter page).

Eternal Radiance follows Celeste, a squire in the Ashen Order, whose dreams of becoming a knight are dashed when a thief steals the artifact she was sent to retrieve for her initiation. Determined to prove herself, Celeste heads out alone to reclaim the artifact. But the theft is only the tip of a dark conspiracy…

It’s a character-driven story, and we hope to have a plot that is compelling while still having many lighthearted moments. Since I’m the game’s writer, please direct any questions you have about Eternal Radiance’s plot and characters to me.

If you like what you see, check out the Kickstarter campaign, lend us your support, and spread the word!